Kaskrin's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Darkest Hour]

The snare is virtually non-existent. Keep working at this style though, it takes time and patience.

[Blueberry (WIP)]

Good base, but as a WIP I'll tell you, it needs more going on. Very simple at the moment, too consistent. It has potential and I hope you can pull it off because this sounds sweet at the moment in progress.

[This planet sucks sack!]

Kick/Snare are way to low.

azabazacaza responds:

Too*

[Summit]

The piano is actually amazing. The transitions have no definition, I can tell what part of the song I'm listening to, it kinda just turns from beautiful to dub. Great work though man.

TheMrMokey responds:

Thanks, I sort of thought it should be that way, I like my songs sectioned of so they are easier to analyze or something :P

[Theme of Darkness]

The snare needs more highs, it sounds muffled like crazy. Everything is pretty sweet otherwise.

[Lemniscate (Basic Bitch)F]

The kick in the intro is too loud, and the snare is too soft. The kick should be lower in pitch as well. The harmonics and the melody are amazing, the drop is too repetitive with the samples you are using. A good song that needs minor fixes, mainly the volume of the snare during the drops

Bidoof45 responds:

i don't adhere to genre standards i'm a rebel 2PUNK4U SRY BB
thanks for the review though

[#swag-attack]

Wobble is way too loud, it compresses every other sound on the track. Also, variation in dubstep is key, as well as structure and balance.

[[fM!]-EndGame-]

The song needs to go somewhere, at the moment this sounds very experimental/ambient. Sounds awesome, but needs structure and melody.

[Lone X - Crystal Sword]

Your melodic and harmonic synths are unique and awesome, you need to focus on percussion and progressions. The intro progression is very house-like and mostly percussion based. There also needs to be a re-occurring hook that the listener can catch on it. Also, try out some automation, the kick in the beginning is way to loud compared to anything else. Try to use a real kick sample instead of a synthesized one, it makes for a better non-trance vibe. You have it, but music takes practice and time just like anything else. Listen to tons of dubstep/electro-house, it's the best way to understand song structure and dynamic range.

Lone-X responds:

Thanks! I appreciate this review! I see myself getting better everyday and because of reviews like this, I get better faster. I really do appreciate it!

Peace and love,
Lone X

[Carol of the Wubs]

even out the volume of each sound, volume levels are all over the place

T1LTED responds:

Thanks for the review!