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Nice sounding

The piano is mainly in my right ear, and panning it left and right between chords would actually sound awesome. The main focus should be balanced especially when it's not backed by something counter balancing it.

Right now?

It needs more perk. It's too laid back throughout the whole song, the song needs to get somewhere. The vocalist needs to realize that he has to respond to the beat with the tone of his voice. Only at 1:48 do I see any change in his "velocity". Overall it's alright, but it could have been tighter and much more various.

Interesting

The second note in the up-scale at :18 and :38 doesn't fit in the chord and sounds awkward. At 1:05 the upscale is perfect and I love the background melody. It needs more percussion and variation though, to a casual listener this song would sound the exact same the whole time throughout the song.

DiroNomer responds:

Thanks for the advice buddy.

Try recording your own audio clips

I like the bass and the drop and the basslines but it needs room to breath. There is no breathing room, it's all a constant stream. The most interesting songs, if you realize it or not, have a lot of silent room in them.

Needs more of a core.

I hear to many noises at once, almost like the sounds are all stuffed into 2minutes. You should segment your sounds into sectors of your song beginning with a build and ending with a downfall. What I am trying to say is the song needs more foundation and structure, but you are creative though and that is most important.

I like the groove

Nice song, transitions are a little rough and it's all sampled, but it sounds groovy.

Decibel7 responds:

Yeah the transitions are rough. It was just something I made to figure out how this my software works. I thought it was interesting enough to upload.

good

some fool 0 bombed.. gave you a 5 to compensate

Aight

Melody is great, beat is a bit fast paced and intense for the soft melody, turn up the melody, down with the beat and synth, barely can hear the melody when the drums come in around 1:15..

Pretty good though dude

Repetitive

I give you a 6 for trying, the fact that you made this piece and took time to create music. Quite repetitive 2:15 into the beat is good, ending is good, should have put more of that news broadcast in the beginning, it only builds up 3/4th's of the way in. Song should build up at around 1:00 or 1:30. Doesn't get anywhere for awhile. It's alright man, keep making more music.

NON-DOUCHE *lol*

Pretty good man, beat seems a bit heavy to start off with. The melody is like a beautiful ballerina, and when the beat comes in, it's like she falls but gets back up and keeps going beautifully "Metaphorical". If your using a heavy beat, let it start off at a lower volume, and build up, so slightly that the average listener will barely know. Could also up the melody with the beat if you wanted to.

Overall good job man.

DaMuX responds:

Thanks for the tip man!
I've done it and sent updated the song :D
Thanks again!

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