Kaskrin's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Darkest Hour]

The snare is virtually non-existent. Keep working at this style though, it takes time and patience.

[Blueberry (WIP)]

Good base, but as a WIP I'll tell you, it needs more going on. Very simple at the moment, too consistent. It has potential and I hope you can pull it off because this sounds sweet at the moment in progress.

[This planet sucks sack!]

Kick/Snare are way to low.

azabazacaza responds:

Too*

[Summit]

The piano is actually amazing. The transitions have no definition, I can tell what part of the song I'm listening to, it kinda just turns from beautiful to dub. Great work though man.

TheMrMokey responds:

Thanks, I sort of thought it should be that way, I like my songs sectioned of so they are easier to analyze or something :P

[Theme of Darkness]

The snare needs more highs, it sounds muffled like crazy. Everything is pretty sweet otherwise.

[[fM!]-EndGame-]

The song needs to go somewhere, at the moment this sounds very experimental/ambient. Sounds awesome, but needs structure and melody.

[Lone X - Crystal Sword]

Your melodic and harmonic synths are unique and awesome, you need to focus on percussion and progressions. The intro progression is very house-like and mostly percussion based. There also needs to be a re-occurring hook that the listener can catch on it. Also, try out some automation, the kick in the beginning is way to loud compared to anything else. Try to use a real kick sample instead of a synthesized one, it makes for a better non-trance vibe. You have it, but music takes practice and time just like anything else. Listen to tons of dubstep/electro-house, it's the best way to understand song structure and dynamic range.

Lone-X responds:

Thanks! I appreciate this review! I see myself getting better everyday and because of reviews like this, I get better faster. I really do appreciate it!

Peace and love,
Lone X

[Carol of the Wubs]

even out the volume of each sound, volume levels are all over the place

T1LTED responds:

Thanks for the review!